PLAYER BOY!

A random poem about a guy whos a player and a smart sassy girl who gets him good :)

He walks the street,

With head held high.

As he waits to greet,

The next girl passing by.

He thinks he's so great,

A player boy at heart.

He doesn't dare to date,

He would never even start.

Such sweet girls getting

Caught under his spell.

All leaving with broken hearts,

This he does very well.

Smart, sassy girl now passing by,

As he turns to look she catches his eye.

He smiles to himself as he stands looking slick,

She smiles to herself thinking what a dick.

Now standing there,

Mates by his side,

He winks at her, points to his car,

And yells hey want a ride?

Walking by she laughs,

Without a second glance.

She yells back your zippers undone,

Please do up your f*****g pants.

Reviews

[mark]

hahahaha this is a hilarious write babe its so funny especially the ending,
it really made me laugh.
she got him good in the end lol.
i love it its a great write.
how do u come up with these ideas??
Your such a great writer there is not one of your poems i dislike, they are all very well written.
i love you soooooooo much :)
keep up the great work
xxxxxxxx

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

thankiez hun glad i could amuse you :)
i know right in love the ending :)
thanks babe glad you liked it :)-
idk im to good :)
Awwwww im not that good theres gotta be some you didnt like that much.
i loooove u more
i will mwa xxxooo

[BubblingMe]

Hahaa this poem made me laugh it was very good!

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

thank you glad you enjoyed :)

[BubblingMe]

Your welcome :-)

[MikeV]

I loved that last line lol
great write! :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thought you might lol
thanks :)

[Lisa Victoria]

OMG...this is so funny...I love it!!!!! Great work Cimmy:)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Lol glad it made you laugh :)
thanks hun :)

[Joyrider]

Very well written with a twist at the end. Enjoyed it.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

thanks glad you enjoyed :)

[Sarmelendez]

love it :) you got it to a T lol

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

thanks glad you enjoyed :)

[annabellee]

haha yes indeed a funny little poem. Well written. I loved the picture you used :D

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

thanks hun glad you liked it :) Hahaha yer took awhile deciding what picture to put into it finally decided on that one :)

[annabellee]

you're most welcome :)

[NA]

HA love it! Don't ya just hate players...great read girl...enjoyed :) x

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

sure do im lucky i finally found a good guy :)
Players suck thought i would write a little peace about them :)

[Karl Woof Junior]

it would be amazing it had an ending that gives a characteristic to the girl

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

what do you mean???

[Karl Woof Junior]

please do up your pants is good, but if you personified what i am considering the girls victory it would be great

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

what do you think the ending should have been?

[Karl Woof Junior]

idk what goes on in a girls mind omg babe