Free Fall

Free Fall

A Poem by Pushkar Prabhat
"

.....under the gravity of love!

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There is something about you,
Unknown, unnamed, undiscovered; Divine.
That like a quill,
I keep falling, freely,
In arms of your love.......
Towards eternity.

© 2013 Pushkar Prabhat


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Something from your first. It's quiet exciting to see where you've started from, and where are you now :)
Seems to me you're already one of the best, from the start, and now only remains to find the right style. :)

What concerns this write. I loved it. Every word was placed in the right spot, nothing was there just to pull out a perfect rhyme or something, it's all well penned, and one can actually feel the lines, which is as good as it ever gets. :) Perfect job here.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pushkar Prabhat

7 Years Ago

thanks you so so much.............for a wonderful review..........kind and inspiring words............ read more
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7 Years Ago

my pleasure :)



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Something from your first. It's quiet exciting to see where you've started from, and where are you now :)
Seems to me you're already one of the best, from the start, and now only remains to find the right style. :)

What concerns this write. I loved it. Every word was placed in the right spot, nothing was there just to pull out a perfect rhyme or something, it's all well penned, and one can actually feel the lines, which is as good as it ever gets. :) Perfect job here.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pushkar Prabhat

7 Years Ago

thanks you so so much.............for a wonderful review..........kind and inspiring words............ read more
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7 Years Ago

my pleasure :)
short nd sweet dscription of the dpth of true love:)


Posted 10 Years Ago


Pushkar Prabhat

10 Years Ago

Thanks a lot dear........! :):)
Richa Verma

10 Years Ago

most wlcme!
what a lovely poem. Short but yet so emotional.
loved it :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Pushkar Prabhat

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much.....:-)
annabellee

10 Years Ago

you're most welcome :)
This was wonderful...I like it alot...:).......................

Posted 10 Years Ago


Pushkar Prabhat

10 Years Ago

Thanks a lot sami :-) :-)
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)..................
How powerful the feminine...a curse of the Gods...a blessing from the Gods.
How can we as mere mortal men survive ? Perhaps just surrender...do what nature demands then hide least we be found again.
Enjoyed the read my friend,

Scott

Posted 10 Years Ago


Pushkar Prabhat

10 Years Ago

So true.......very well said! I am glad that you enjoyed it. Thank you sir for this great review!
Sweet,sweet,sweet!!!!!Your words are like music to my soul:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pushkar Prabhat

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much.... :-) :-)
Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

You are welcome:)
there is no better feeling than falling in love,
its powerful, and frightening and exciting all at the same time.
Beautifully depicted in your poem,
bravo.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Pushkar Prabhat

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much for this kind and insightful review!
I like freefalls but I recognize that this is a poem about love, nice written

Posted 10 Years Ago


Pushkar Prabhat

10 Years Ago

Thanks a lot... :-)
BubblingMe

10 Years Ago

Your welcome((:
Dis poem is divine. Thnx for sharing..

Posted 10 Years Ago


Pushkar Prabhat

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much penny!
Penny

10 Years Ago

Ur welcum.

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Added on December 12, 2013
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Tags: free fall, love, eternity, quill

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Pushkar Prabhat
Pushkar Prabhat

Bhagalpur, India



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