WIND ME UP!

A racecar needs, to be checked over, and preheated,

Before it can be raced and taken around a track.

Always needs a warm up,not to feel defeated,

And to run without proformace lack.

A flower needs to be watered, and treated with care,

Its delicate, and needs time to flare.

To really enjoy a song, u need to understand the words before u move to the beat,

Use ur heart, and really listen, youll feel better when you move your feet.

Things are not to be rushed, and are sometimes better when taken slow.

Its how hearts become crushed, when the person you Havnt truly gotten to know.

Remember these lessons With a woman and youll learn,

When given love and patience the brighter we burn.

So take your time with every touch, and every kiss,

Its these moments that make the end result such bliss.

You need to know how to touch a woman to ignite,

A fire a passion that will burn so bright.

Entice her, excite her and u will see,

Just how special love making can be.

Because its never all about the destination u know

Its about along the way, all the places you go.

So wind me up and leave me begging for more,

Before you go ahead and close the god darn door.

Reviews

[barleygirl]

Your title brings to mind the Rolling Stones song "start me up" & yet you definitely take this message into your own unique directions. My pet peeve in today's online back-and-forth with guys, is that they are in such a damn hurry to pop a score, they clearly don't give a s**t about getting to know me. Since I am irritated by this, I would write a poem that sounds caustic, criticizing this flash-in-the-pan behavior from men. So the reason I admire your message is becuz you are sincerely trying to explain a better way to do this, rather than to criticize how it's being done. Sometimes people really don't know what they're doing wrong, so your poem gives a guy the benefit of the doubt, that he can be taught to do better. But of course, I'm old & jaded, so I can only wish you luck! By the way, I haven't seen you here in a long while & I'm glad I saw you again, so I could see what you're writing & posting here! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

I loved ur review. Thanks so much for taking the time to leave such a review. Its interesting what u got from my poem, just proves everyone can see thijgs in different ways. Im glad to be back

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree dear Poet.
"So wind me up and leave me begging for more,
Before you go ahead and close the god darn door."
If we forget what made love sweet. One, can be forget. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and wisdom.
Coyote

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

No thank you for all your lovley reviews :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Always my pleasure and you are welcome my friend.