Celestial Beauty

Up above, in the enchanting night sky
a shooting star streaks by
a crescent moon shimmers bright
stars twinkle on this magical night
There's not a cloud in the sky
the winds softly sigh
the beauty that shines tonight
floods my soul with delight
I could gaze at the sky forever
at this celestial treasure
Come outside and gaze up and see
a sky shining with beauty
a beautiful celestial show
which shall forever shine and glow.

Reviews

[Nae Nae]

I'm in love with the stars, the way they glitter as if to wink at you, as if they are trying to say they see you. I love the way they are so free, the way that they have no limits, no boundaries, no cage that they constantly are forced to live in. What you've written here is beautiful, it's the perfect sky on the perfect night. The grammar is not the best I'll say, but the content of Celestial Beauty is so pure and so full I could read it over, and over again.

Nae-Nae...

[Tina Kline]

Very very beautiful, your words and the way you put them together create such a magical scene in my mind.

Fantastic job!