ablaze

ablaze

 

 

the blue tip of a flame

you're my cool touch

at the end of the day

just above the orange solace

that burns within my heart

for the love you kindle

when you strike me

with your arson eyes

 

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

8/8/15

Reviews

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few things can set one's passion ablaze like those suggestive eyes... seems the thermostat has gone through the roof in this one, my friend...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, FT.

j.

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"Arson eyes"...Love that! Smokin' hot metaphors :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words,

j.

[Lydia Shutter]

Ohhhhh so seductive and suggestive! The eyes have it....and they have you too! Wonderful metaphor. Lydi**

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Lydi---

appreciate your thoughts...and kind words.

j.

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

Everyone does tell me...if looks could kill, they'd be on fire! LOL Love your passionate playful manner in these pieces...it brings a warmness that just won't be denied :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Queenie.

j.

[Alfred Kukitz]

Oh the crime of the moment awaiting to singe you into altered states of amour.

Regards,
Al

[jacob erin-cilberto]

very insightful reply, Al...

thank you much,
j.

[Cherry Pepperweb]

Awesome. Much more dangerous than Bette Davis eyes!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

"her hair is Harlow gold, her lips sweet surprise"
thank you, Cherry...

j

[Miss Sharon]

Woooo...arson eyes eh? Gotta watch out for those Jacob. Love this write! ~Sharon

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, my friend...

j.

[Miss Sharon]

Always my pleasure Jacob. ;>)

[Roxie M]

Metaphors consistently hot! Your arsonist lover sets you ablaze with look and cools you off with their touch. Very well done indeed.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Roxie....

j