pleasant infractions

pleasant infractions

instigator winks 

a simile of lashes

like encroachment 

off-sides,

but she declines the penalty

then throws a smile in his direction,

his heart intercepts 

they both win.

erin-cilberto

12/27/15

Reviews

[Jimmy Yetts]

In all likelihood, the losses will come, later.
Should marriage eventually follow, children must not be considered "holding penalties." (Most especially, I suppose. if marriage does not precede any children.)
Despite my inherent cynicism, this brilliant account of the flirtatious game is a truly lovely and uniquely perceptive bit of work!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i really appreciate your insightfully clever reply...

j.

[andrew mitchell]

Jacob you are a wizard when it comes to writes, this one is exceptional! The initial contact is made between these two! I wonder where they go from here!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, andrew.
j.

[andrew mitchell]

she declines the penalty??? does this mean she's taken j,




read moreshe declines the penalty??? does this mean she's taken j,































































does the penalty implied mean she's taken j as on going back to this poem cos this line had options and intrigue i now think these pleasant infractions are just playful flirtations and they both win by not committing any further!

[andrew mitchell]

sorry can't edit my comment ! a bit of a gap!