a quill's nearness

a quill's nearness

 

 

 

you write words

make me blush,

 

make my heart gush,

make my pen push

 

itself flush

with yours.

 

skin,

akin

wherein

 

we are one.

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

3/20/16

Reviews

[iand63]

a quill's nearness
is another hair's breadth

nice one Mr J

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Mr. ian...:)))

j.

[alanwgraham]

playing with words is fun
look for the pun
just let all go
let the words flow
the paper is blank
the rhymes might be rank
but don't give a toss
if your writing is dross
there aren't any rules
just write whatever takes your fancy!

sorry Jacob but your work has inspired me - I did enjoy it!
Thanks,
Alan

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i liked your poetic reply...and appreciate your visit, alan...thanks for the smile.

j.

[Lyn Anderson]

Your quill is very skilled, to make a parchment peel.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i appreciate your words, KL...

j.

[Lyn Anderson]

it's a sexy little number.:)

[Relic's Bare Trees]

I believe there are a couple of ways to look at this. A romantic (erotic) viewpoint and from a like-minded viewpoint. The short phrases, rhyming and choppy feel help the effect greatly.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Rain.

j.

[Cryingkate]

This is one of those writes that you don't have to think about anything, Just enjoy the emotional ride.
I enjoyed it very much. It started on the first words "A quill's nearness" It already set the stage for a Nostalgic, Romantic scene.
I felt like the writer was truly sharing his soft, sensuous private indulgence of that special bond between himself and that special writing friend.
Maybe not many yearn or have had that experience, but I have and it's so beyond what words can describe. It just never works when you try to find it. It just happens.
Ah.....Thanks for the reminder.... Just to talk about that waltz again.. Awe ! Your few words really said it all

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind review, Connie...

j.

[Alfred Kukitz]

The bond of forever bliss. Sweet!

regards,
al

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Al.

j.

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

very sweet little write...it literally embodies the connection between romance and writing.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your visit and kind words, Sprint..

j.

[James]

Not hard to see the romance in this, "skin, akin wherein we are one." The ultimate unity, marriage?

[jacob erin-cilberto]

mmmm that's a possibility...
thank you for your words, James.

j.

[highonwords]

the poem as the beloved, the poet as the lover - paper skin to a pen's tip - the poet lover becomes one with the beloved poem :)

lovely write, jacob

my best,
steph

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind review, steph....

j.

[highonwords]

you're welcome, jacob :)

regards,
steph

[Nisreen]

The romance that can occur between two pens
its very cute
i always believed writers truly do influence one another
more than one could think ......

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i have been so influenced from reading writing on this site...and infused that influence into what i write...i thank everyone here with whom i communicate and read...and who read me.