you are the colonel in my coffee

you are the colonel in my coffee

 

 

 

a soldier standing at your attention

 

your lips salute mine

and i become a private 

on weak kneed furlough

so "at ease"

 

i'm falling all over you.

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

8/8/16

Reviews

[aLittlePain]

I like this very much, a rather lovely drop :) R x

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Rach.
j.

[Kelly Scheppers]

It's definitely an addiction for me, but at least I'm among good company...and poets!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and i hate coffee...but it perks up lines of poetry in some way---only tried it once in my life...read moreand i hate coffee...but it perks up lines of poetry in some way---only tried it once in my life...
but i like its metaphoric ability...

thank you, Kelly...

j.

[Kelly Scheppers]

Oh, how funny...really?

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, my dad made me try it when we were fishing once...i spit it out...never tried it again.
:)))

[Kelly Scheppers]

Have you ever tried "Dunkin Donuts"...that's how I got hooked. I've got one of those Keurig coffee makers that uses coffee pods. It's really fool-proof, perfect coffee every time. I'm sure its a lot better than that stuff your Dad tried to pass off as "coffee". It was strong, huh...probably could have walked out of the pot! ; )

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i'll pass, thanks....

[andrew mitchell]

Yes the love of coffee, to savor that taste, that moment. Its a love in itself.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, andrew,...

j,

[Baby Ricochet]

Ah romance. Tis a beautiful thing.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, it is, Mark...

thank you for reading...

j.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

I am a coffee addict, sir. But coffee plus love one beside you would be completely different.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Dhaye...

even though i use it a lot in my poetry...i had one sip of coffee in my life...fishing with my dad...first and last...:)))

appreciate your visits, always.

j.

[Sami Khalil]

I think coffee put us at ease and what a comparison, Jacob...:).............

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Sami!

j.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)..................

[Phillip Francis]

"on weak kneed furlough, so "at ease"" is a fantastic line. This is great. nice work. Thank you for sharing.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Phillip...

j.

[Pryde Foltz]

The colonel in my coffee is a shot of cream ... love my coffee:):):)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Pryde....

j.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Coffee has been saving lives of everyone I deal with in the mornings, LOL
Good one Jacob.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Dale...

j.

[Lola_Bee]

short and beautiful, your words offer so much depth and meaning that you only need so few. well done

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Lola, appreciate your words.

j.