One of the things I most admire & envy about your word crafting is the way you come up with dozens of catchy phrases with which to title each of your well-crafted works. This title is amazing. As do most of your titles, it starts my imagination zooming ahead with ideas of what this could be about. I'm always surprised, tho, becuz your content is often quite different than my imagined ramblings. This message describes how some break-ups are like car wrecks, but usually even more incendiary as the blame game burns on.
I have seen far too many of these wrecks, mechanical and human, and your words convey both well. There are those to whom honesty is a foreign concept and those we elect. Good write, j.
sad when a relationship is reduced to this. When a person can lie and not even think about the lies, he or she has no conscience. I think people who lie a lot end up believing their own lies. Good one, Jacob. Lydi**
do I detect a wee bit of anger and testiness here Jacob... of course it is difficult not to be angry hen "honesty" is untranslatable and foreign to the tongue... you start off with the first of some really great images.. in a collision and wreck, the world definitely is on fire... often this fire takes everyone with too, no survivors... while I may have not read your poem accurately Jacob, there were a lot of feelings here... feelings that leave the reader shaken (definitely not stirred) in your metaphor and images...
redzone
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
you read it as you saw it...that is all the accuracy needed...appreciate your review, Curt.
<.. read moreyou read it as you saw it...that is all the accuracy needed...appreciate your review, Curt.
Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at a community college and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. I am here to read for inspiration from other po.. more..