Committed

Committed

severed reasoning,

love's decapitated sense

i rue rubber rooms

erin-cilberto

9/15/18

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

and rue the day love knocked me block off ;) great word play with your title sir .. subtle as can be says i! and i think the satire is biting ..in love's rubber rooms its not the walls that hurt are they ;{ an emotive and intellectual senryu ...very well done says i!
E.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, E.
j.

[emmajoy]

As rich a truth as truth can be - brief but with variying ability's passion!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, em...
j.

[emmajoy]

owe you more than just the one review.. i will return.. but thank YOU for what floats into vision.

[Relic]

Relationships can get crazy, and yes, senses can spiral out of control. How many people do I know that started out with their heads on cloud nine only to fall like hail later? Sadly, those people keep adding up.

[θεά ]

It always take two to tango, two to tangle.

[Relic]

................ :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Relic.
j.

[θεά]

There is something so stark and unsettling about this. Just the way you intended it I suppose.

When reasoning is severed, with the clash of expectations, never to be resolved, no matter how hard both try, what is left is a carnage.

Short, precise and packs in a punch.