yer betteren me

yer betteren me

i like reading yer pottery

you are creativer than i yam

i wished my mind werked like that

my thoughts unravel like poured gravel

dumped on a road of confusion

but at least my spilling 

and grandeur 

is improving

but

i still like reading yer pottery

it's always a bowl 

shaped of good werds.

erin-cilberto

11/21/2020

Reviews

[Neville]

......... if ya writ this when yoo woz six and a half or so.. I might beleeve ya .... if ya writ it more recent than that ... all I can say is you musta wrot it 4 me ... UR bril j xx

[jacob erin-cilberto]

age? stopped counting...ha ha.
thanks Neville,
j.

[Beccy]

Takes a little over 5 minutes to boil up a saucepan of alphabet pasta. Not exactly a classic ode or gourmet fare, time wise. But take an extra minute or so heat a pan of olive oil, add crushed pepper and garlic, then top off with homemade tomato basil garnish, and hey presto, instant, if still slightly bland success. Plus, if you get bored, you can always make up a poem from the letters swirling around in the bowl. :))

Wish I cud rite a pome that quik. :))

Beccy.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

ha ha ha, thanks, Beccy---
your recipe sounds delicious.
j.

[Pete]

not sure what to say. at a loss for words. a bit of drunken dyslexia perhaps. this really, unexpectedly struck my funny bone this rainy morning ... :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Pete, glad this poem could make you smile,
j.

[redzone]

Jacob are u spilling your grandeur all ovr yer werds agin??? my my my, she dun treet u wrong, butt she wer beutifil wern't she??? and they say revenge is best served cold, but isn't it best servd in a boel wit werds ina hot pome..... and Jacob, no werds wer harmd as i uset my dictonery....

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I spill alllot at me age.
thank you, Curt.
j.

[VALORMORE DE PLUME]

Might as well face it yer adickhed 2 luv.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I love this! Thank you for the smile, Valormore.
j.

[.]

You are better than me... I think this is the title. She was more proper in her words, but less heart in it. He was willing to follow this superficial art..

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Yeah, it's like that...thank you, Dreamer.
j.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Interesting sardonic and witty tilt at the windmills of the mind of the less well educated like wot I am Jacob!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Oh I am right with you, John...there are those so full of themselves there just isn't room for anyone else.
j.