a very short poem

a very short poem

 

 

the river

               swirled

 

without logic.

 

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

5/22/2021

Reviews

[Cherrie Palmer]

The magic that few words hold is always amazing. Nothing better than time on the river.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

absolutely, Cherrie...thank you.
j.

[Kerra]

So much truth in this write Jacob, Nicely said

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Kerra,
j.

[Chris Shaw]

The river looks for the easiest route on its travels downstream. It meanders freely. Logic doesn't come in to it. I liked the layout of your words. They resembled the river. Then I thought about my mood over the last week. That's swirled too without logic. I can't help feeling there is so much more here than I can see.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

moods swing into tributaries...and those aren't always calm.
thank you, Chris,
j.

[Chris Shaw]

Yes, I understand :)