Haiku #21

Haiku #21

A Poem by mattavelli
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Senryu

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through my dying eyes
I watch the angels come down
wait... those are vultures

© 2021 mattavelli


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Haikus are so meaningful when written right , you have written so beautifully bout how we are so drunk in faith that we believe every bird is an angel , truth is angels are there for people having faiths not drunkards. It d be funny to see the reactions of the people realizing those are nasty vultures 😂

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mattavelli

3 Months Ago

Thanks for reading, Kathy! :)



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Your senryu takes organ donation to a whole new level, Mattavelli! Angels or devils or indeed vultures....who can say? A clever piece of writing. ⚘

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mattavelli

2 Weeks Ago

Thanks for reading, Jamila! :)
lol, that would be my luck for sure. loved it, too funny. with a twist of morbid fate

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mattavelli

3 Weeks Ago

Thanks for reading, Corset! :)
Finally someone who knows how to write a form write...
this is really good and cute.
Awesome write

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mattavelli

3 Weeks Ago

Thanks for reading! :)
WOW. This is great. I am speechless.

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mattavelli

3 Weeks Ago

Thanks for reading! :)
light and ashes

3 Weeks Ago

You are so VERY welcome! You did such a fantastic job! :)
LOL, you caught me by surprise. :)

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mattavelli

1 Month Ago

Thanks for reading, JE! :)
That was great! I think a movie should be made based on that. A religious horror movie

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mattavelli

1 Month Ago

Thanks for reading, William! :)
Religious movies creep me out.
I do love this form. I find it funny that this can be the simplest form and yet it can be the most difficult to get right. I love the content. You encapsulate your thought so well, in so few words. Have a wonderful Wednesday....Mike.


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mattavelli

1 Month Ago

Thanks for reading, Mike! :)
shadrach hah

1 Month Ago

Your welcome, Matt.
HA! OMG you're utterly ultra-awesome! What more can I say?

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Seth Cason

2 Months Ago

Oh--:derp-- I knew it slightly felt familiar. Good thing I have the memory of a goldfish. Its still .. read more
mattavelli

2 Months Ago

Thanks for reading again, Seth! :)
Wowser! A powerful message in such few words. ~Sharon

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mattavelli

2 Months Ago

Thanks for reading, Sharon! :)
Haikus are so meaningful when written right , you have written so beautifully bout how we are so drunk in faith that we believe every bird is an angel , truth is angels are there for people having faiths not drunkards. It d be funny to see the reactions of the people realizing those are nasty vultures 😂

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

mattavelli

3 Months Ago

Thanks for reading, Kathy! :)

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