Haiku #21

Haiku #21

A Poem by mattavelli
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Senryu

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through my dying eyes
I watch the angels come down
wait... those are vultures

© 2021 mattavelli


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mattavelli
Please let me know what you think.

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Emily Dickinson loved this theme. It's a terrible prospect when one really thinks about it.

Posted 4 Hours Ago


LOL maybe the vultures are just stand-ins for the angels while they have their afternoon tea

Posted 20 Hours Ago


Love this Haiku poem, you certainly have a surprise ending...very clever Mat
Best, B

Posted 2 Days Ago


Imagine that calm serenity as the Angels come down to pick you up, then totally realising they ain't no Angels.

Posted 1 Week Ago


mattavelli

1 Week Ago

Thanks for reading, Paul! :)
mattavelli

1 Week Ago

Thanks for reading, Paul! :)


what an exceptional 5 7 5 you have penned my friend .. write on :)

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

mattavelli

1 Week Ago

Thanks for reading! :)
Neville

1 Week Ago


an absolute pleasure Matt & all mine my friend :)
the dark humor here is great

really good write

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

mattavelli

1 Week Ago

Thanks for reading! :)
PlayWrite

1 Week Ago

youre welcome
So much in few words and great humor to boot. When it's right, it's right. You just know what you need to write and what you don't. I love it when it's like that. Wonderfully explained and expressed. tyfs

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

mattavelli

2 Weeks Ago

Thanks for reading, Cyprian! :)
OH MY hhhhaaa! SO funny but surely scary!! this is so much like your style Matt, hahahaah really thank You for the big laugh this morning,

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

mattavelli

2 Weeks Ago

Thanks for reading, Lightsong! :)
OMG Dude!! Ha Ha Ha--- that is sick and beautiful!!! Just now, while visiting relatives are stuffing their face-holes with dismembered, indiscriminate grilled slabs of animal, I sneaked (snuck?) away and I'm glad this is the first and, for a little while, the last poem I want to review because I don't want to risk deactivating my suddenly better mood. Well, Matt, have a vulture-free holiday. I'm heading back into the family moshpit.

Seth

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


mattavelli

2 Weeks Ago

Thanks for reading, Seth! :)
Have fun with your family.
Love it!
The contrast for the angels and vultures

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

mattavelli

2 Weeks Ago

Thanks for reading, jasper! :)

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