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Changes

Changes

A Poem by Einstein Noodle

        
"Changes"
apophonic harps ringing in my ears
I hit the wall of my obsessions
My senses of expression
we just can't hold hummingbirds                                                                                                                                                                                                                            
(Can We?)                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              
rivers run through  rocks
please don't sing for me     ~         a
plaintive keening
don't tell me  your art                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       
(Show Me)                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         
alterations to a tailor like a
calico kitten's soft      ~      rough
rouged tongue
don't write those things  for me                                                                                                                                                                                                                           
(i thought my prayers would get me closer)                                                                                                                                                                                                              
Sailor mendicant, hearing the sirens' wailing
finger tips          ~           map tats
trace story lines of mermaids           and
the deep               where fish creatures glow effervescent                                                                                                                                                                                         
(i wish i had not run so fast)                                                                                                                                                                                                                              
may i read your palm?
reel with me
in you          -         swirls
Divine intervention                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             
(there is the Tunnel)                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          
peacocks fanned tail  extravagance
melding pot calamity
great love        the
living of the dead                                                                                                                                                                                                                                               
(There is the Light)                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     
On Winds and clouds
lithe bodies bound
flights in fancy fandango
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7/21/20
E.
          

© 2020 Einstein Noodle


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Einstein Noodle

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I always have a smile from reading your poetry E. Amazing depth once more and I wish the world could see such skill as yours, remarkable :) There is a process to this piece in my eyes...a layered building up to a completion of recognition, not just a wander through imagery but an actual process, very cleverly executed and articulated. Sometimes dreams and hopes are so fragile they tear along the jagged path on this journey called life but the living on and holding on to faith and acceptance make living a little easier sometimes...life is an art and your art glows brightly in bold metaphor, wonderful E :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Einstein Noodle

3 Years Ago

thank you so much for your sensitive, intuitive reading of this .. and yes (you make me smile) belie.. read more
Ruth

3 Years Ago

Same dear E and I mean every word, you are an amazing writer, have a lovely day :)



Reviews

may i read your palm?
reel with me
in you - swirls
Divine intervention

I like this depth of feeling, i do think same, when our mind/life experiences doesnt tell who is the right one made and stayed for you, i think Divine intervention is the final verdict, and there is life time ahead to read every depth of your emotion, why it cant be the count of all breaths so far of endless emotions. I really like how you are capturing every emotion in a video with heart felt music, to tell your intent. Is there anything beyond 3D that can go beyond, yes there is not, i never thought my prayers would get me closer to him, though i pray for him, the one for me, since i grew that big where i thought of having one for me, seeing him in a mirror with just shade of soul without how is going to look. People stopped by, and left with a scar on heart, i never knew that there is one for me who is waiting so much like me in needing of love forever, and taking risk to nowhere where heart leads to. A very great poem which melted and touched my heart!
i thank, you Cafe, to make it reach me.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Years Ago

that is one of the nicest things i have heard in a long time .. no .. my fuse is a long one .. i don.. read more
JessyJacob

2 Years Ago

I too dont get angry that easily, but if someone keeps on injuring on the same point for long time, .. read more
Einstein Noodle

2 Years Ago

i appreciate that my friend! :)
We never really make peace with change, now do we? Brilliantly written.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

3 Years Ago

especially at my age Sleepless! you are too kind .. thank you!
E.
SleeplessVolcano

3 Years Ago

You are like red wine....getting better with age :)
Einstein Noodle

3 Years Ago

as i said ..too kind my friend .. especially since i am full of beer :))))))))))))))))))))))))) slai.. read more
This is tale that takes you away and creates thought.

Can one hold a hummingbird?...
I truly do not have the answer

Ahh and tale as old as time sailors listening to the sirens song only to be lost forever.

We are all bewitched by someone or something in life without intending to be it simply happens

Posted 3 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

3 Years Ago

thanks for reading Ms. Beauty .. abstract free verse is not for everyone but is my first choice of e.. read more
Poetic Beauty

3 Years Ago

I enjoy reading your poems. It may not be the intended meaning but it is thought provoking.
Einstein Noodle

3 Years Ago

i think you got every bit of my meaning ;) .. it's yours :))
it has been a worthwhile experience in reading your poems it speaks about life in itself the many angles the exciting moments and even the turbulent times can contribute to what is life really all about

Posted 3 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

3 Years Ago

yes! i agree sette ... its a crazy, wonderful life if we let it be ... love your take on this one an.. read more
One of your bests! a fine creative piece with your very own personal style, and I must think of "changes" as the changes we made to our poems too, not only the changes in life from birth, death to the rebirth, and how we must flow with them not to resist them, still I dive here into a world of creation and inspiration, as writers with our limitless imagination we can hold and catch a "hummingbird" even if in reality we can not, and that's exactly the message, You with your neat way brought it to us, that in our world of creation everything is possible, and that's why You are at the end flying with the hummingbirds,

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so the answer we maybe not able to catch them, but we CAN be them and fly with them. magnificent one Mr. E.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

3 Years Ago

:)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))) my heart is all aflutter and giddy at your review .. i had.. read more
lightsong

3 Years Ago

So very warmly welcome dear E💖 and for me you said them all :) love ya ✨💕✨
You blew me away with this one E I must re-read and ponder to receive a "second blessing" as it were! Thank you my friend. I always enjoy reading you. ~Sharon

Posted 3 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

3 Years Ago

you are so kind. thank you for peeking around to find it Miss Sharon .. i am the one blessed .. with.. read more
i got stuck in the 60`s e,, great words of wisdom my friend,we all change

Posted 3 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

3 Years Ago

well ... i am a bit biased; but those were the best of days eh!? in all its chaos and troubles .. ev.. read more
 wordman

3 Years Ago

yeap for us all
Yes we either move with the times or get left behind. Love David Bowie's song. A lovely write full of hidden gems to find.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

3 Years Ago

hey buddy! good to have your visits always ... thank you .. i am happy you found a thing or two in t.. read more
andrew mitchell

3 Years Ago

You took me places with each stanza like sea mysteries, mermaids, a future told, light at the end o.. read more
Einstein Noodle

3 Years Ago

:) ........................
ok E. I had to read this one a couple of times. Think I will be pondering this one for a while. Your writing is extraordinary and riveting filled with mounds of depth and boundless imagination. You have a wonderful gift. Not sure exactly what your poem is saying, but what a ride it took me on. The feel of movement through life. Somewhere on the spectrum between happiness and grief in times. Life an ever changing growth usually through hardship. And love and relationships are the dance that make it all worthwhile. It is an absolute pleasure to read your work. Makes me think, wonder, feel and smile too.


Posted 3 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

3 Years Ago

thank you so much for your review and time spent reading and pondering .. i could not possibly ask f.. read more
I enjoyed the complete poem.
"Sailor mendicant, hearing the sirens' wailing
finger tips ~ map tats
trace story lines of mermaids and
the deep where fish creatures glow effervescent "
The lines above were my favorite. The poem took me to better places and better thoughts my friend. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

3 Years Ago

love on ya brother! so humbled and gratified by your response to this poem .. and for pointing out t.. read more
Coyote Poetry

3 Years Ago

You are welcome my friend.

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