brief heart

brief heart

 

 

 

this poem

 

,,,,,,,,,,is

 

longer than

 

 

my feelings  for you..............

Reviews

[Lorry]

And if that doesn't exorcise the ghosts, nothing will. I guess that's why feelings don't have an expiry date or why most are straight from the remainder bin. Oh, that's just me is it? 😊

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, no expiration date, but some get stale anyway...and full of mold.
thank you, Lorry,
read moreyes, no expiration date, but some get stale anyway...and full of mold.
thank you, Lorry,
j.

[Poetic Beauty]

There are some loves or encounters that indeed are shorter than this poem.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

sometimes just the Hello is the end.
thank you, PB,
j.

[Poetic Beauty]

Yes well mine is fizzling out...
but this one wasn’t meant to be forever. But with this it has allowed me and my Beasty to have some heart to heart conversation lately. We tell each other almost everything.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

When we fall in love with someone not much needs to be said when actions seak louder than words.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

true, Cowboy, true.
thanks,
j.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Good
Love it 😊
Hope you are well Jacob

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Julie,
j.

[Lydia Shutter]

WOW, talk about putting someone down. This is priceless! Lydi**

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Lydi...
j.

[Fairy Khan]

So mean. Haha. Good to be give some people the taste of their own medicine sometimes.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for the read and words, Fairy.
j.

[Sami Khalil]

Brief but what a relief to leave that muse, I surmise. A brief encounter on the counter of rejection. Whoaaa

[jacob erin-cilberto]

your response, Sami, is better than the poem...and more poetic.
thank you,
j.

[Sami Khalil]

Hehehe. You are welcome sir Jacob

[Chris Shaw]

Your muse is being very economical, maybe because you are so busy. This little piece of brevity makes me think your muse was striking a blow for all past hurts. Whether a him a her or maybe a them who were responsible, , it hit hard. Ouch I thought. Your muse is being nasty. You could never be.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I try not to be nasty....but everyone slips here and there.....thank you, Ms. Chris.
j.

[John the Baptist]

Damn, j., you can be nasty when you want to.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

nuff said, eh, John?

thanks.
j.