Love the rebellion against tradition in writing, while keeping with others we can certainly adapt and modify to make our writing interesting and meaningful.
"when mortality
wore too many syllables
they buried the vowels" I really enjoyed this senryu so much. It's been a while since I had a good laugh or chuckle. Wonderful work my friend.
This is why I don't care for rhyme or meter or whatever. What I feel at the moment is what finds it's way onto the page. I just hope that it all makes sense and that some like it.
Take care - Dave
Posted 2 Years Ago
2 Years Ago
Dave, I appreciate you...thanks for stopping by and for the comment.
j.
An injured love, clipped wings, hopeful rainbow on the horizon, feeling mortal and closer to the end. Wow!
At least your name will live on and your legacy will not move on.
Long live sir Jacob!
Posted 2 Years Ago
2 Years Ago
Thanks, Sami, you are too kind. But again, I doubt I can take credit for my writings...they just com.. read moreThanks, Sami, you are too kind. But again, I doubt I can take credit for my writings...they just come to me and I am more of a conduit...
but thanks,
j.
Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at a community college and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. I am here to read for inspiration from other po.. more..