carried away

carried away

 

 

float me into madness river

I want to be driftwood tears

obliged to current my feelings

 

aside

there are shores of memories

beauty in the reflections

like an old moon on a new ripple

 

but I know what we were

another may not believe or understand

but I knew them,

really knew them

 

and love doesn't always stay sane.

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

2/5/22

Reviews

[Patricia]

My goodness you are on a roll with the emotional writes! I love this! I feel this way all the time, well not when I’m being immature with family joking around and when I’m cooking for some reason;)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your understanding review, Patricia,
j.

[Patricia Wedel]

Beautiful Sentiments for the Faint of 💜 Heart…
tenderly, Pat

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Pat,
j.

[M. J. Smith]

Love, by its very Nature, is not sane. More so when it ends or turns dark. It is the greatest source of emotional chaos in a person's life. Well written, J.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, M.J.
j.