shrewd surmise

shrewd surmise

 

 

 

able entrapment

the first kiss corners

the second garners

embattled surrender

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

2/13/22

Reviews

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

I really like the title and the poem was a short shot of high volume. A kiss can be cornered even in the open. tyfs

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Cyprian...
j.

[M. J. Smith]

I would suggest willing surrender. The Valentine's Day plague continues to sweep across the site! Ha, ha!
Actually, romance has long been the principle theme of poets an singers. Short and sweet here. Well done.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, M.J.,
j.

[Patricia]

Yes yes and yes! You could have went on with this one but yes, I guess enough said! Imagination wandering….

[jacob erin-cilberto]

"just my imagination, running away with me"---
thank you, Patricia,
j.

[Patricia]

love that song!