short-term loan

short-term loan

 

six poems in six days

April rains a Rembrandt 

of word colors

the canvas avoiding spring

until the verse is converse

 

and the artist

affluent 

in arbitrary confusion

suffers his readers

to a constant flurry

 

from a fleeting 

failing quill

 

the magic

was always momentary.

 

 

erin-cilberto

4/2/24

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Our poems are all moments in time. Many of them pass by quickly. I think we are all hoping we can compose a Rembrandt. A poem that lasts and is appreciated years after our demise. This one is memorable j. A relatable piece.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

at least for a few months...thank you, dear Chris.
j.

[mabel mae]

This really explains the exact emotion that’s felt when posting something on here. Very quickly it becomes a thing of “for.” It’s always for something or someone. It’s always just for a moment. -mabel

[jacob erin-cilberto]

It is just for a moment...thank you, mabel,
j.

[poetgurl (Plainly Meg)]

Rembrandt, love that painter. this is an amazing write.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, poetgurl,
j.