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A Poem by E S Stevens
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This poem is a sister piece to my short story, "Broken."

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An arm extended, now moist and golden,

I sit and wait for time to tell.


Subdued nervousness fill the harshly lit bathroom �"

a fog of unknown futures and unplanned possibilities.


The ticking of an egg timer chants from the counter,

cold impersonal clicks �" it cares not for children.

© 2012 E S Stevens


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I like the words coined in this poem. Keep it up. I expect more from your poem especially on humanitary approach. You are having the capacity of word power also. My best wishes.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on May 30, 2012
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