Dreaming

I had a dream

That his kiss

Knocked me out

Because I had

Waited so long

Loved him so long

 

I had a dream

That his hands

On my hips

Was all I needed

Forever, because I

Loved him so long

 

I had a dream

That his fingers

Tracing my face

Was my only desire

And he didn't need to

Lose it to at all

 

I woke up from my dream

That left me breathless

That left me stunned

That kisses still

Contain electricity

When you're in love

 

I woke up and

Wished it was real

And I missed him

When I didn't wake up

Right next to him

That morning

 

It was so real

I forgot I wasn't

Actually with him

Just dreaming

Reviews

[Perry]

I really appreciate this one. My favorite dreams are when I fall in love yet its a very bittersweet experience when waking up and realizing that person was made up in your mind. This is the type of work I wish I would have thought of to write about, and honestly it's quite rare for me to come up on a piece that makes me feel like that..

[RAWR!]

i like how this was written,
very clean and to the point.

[Clockwork]

I know this feeling, maybe in a different way because I am a guy, but this feeling all the same. It stings and it seems real. If you are a man you are not supposed to admit that either for fear of being scorned by both men and woman. That is how it is though. Loved one day, gone the next if by your hand or theirs.

[Naomi Montana Walsh]

I used to have those dreams as well and now I live in that dream it was not the first love of my life nor the second or even third that made those dreams come true I was already 42 when when i found that magic . Very well written .

[Ethan Paz]

Excellent immagery. kinda what i think but not exactly caze im not a girl lol

[Wolfe Greytome]

I really like this. It doesn't seem to flow quite right to me, but I think that adds to its effect rather than detracting from it. The almost - but not quite - perfect flow on this poem give it an electrified, choppy dream sort of feel - much as the words describe.