Addicted Drug With No Substitute

Addicted Drug With No Substitute

A Poem by Eve Ola
"

My Soulmate by breath!

"

Addicted Drug With No Substitute

You are my drug Running through my blood
You are my thought running all via my head
You are my wish i ever want to live with
You are my breath that forced me to live

A soul of your love living inside my body
An inhaler for my life to move around
A smile that exists with you by my side
A pain that I share by your shoulder

You are the one I addicted off
God knows the best that
This Girl will be no more
When he is not around

For me your are my life
For me you are my world
For me you are my best friend
In fact,
For me you are my everything in all

What I want and what my need
Its nothing other than You my love
Come n hug me tight as,
I am dead please hold me tight

I am going insane as you are not around
Louder screams striking my heart
Your disappearances killing me a lot
As you are my drug am addicted of

Hidden sounds suggesting me too
Go for other why you are dying
But to them its my clear message
There is no substitute of Him
He is one but just mine!


~AK~

© Eve Ola

© 2014 Eve Ola


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Love is addiction and you have proved it again. Nice job.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I enjoyed the complete poem. Positive energy and need.
"There is no substitute of Him
He is one but just mine!"
Good to know what we need and want. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


Eve Ola

9 Years Ago

Thanks Coyote :)
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

You are welcome.
This is a nice poem. Nicely written.

~Kurayami

Posted 9 Years Ago


Eve Ola

9 Years Ago

Thank you :)
nice poem...flow is beautiful and feelings are as usual powerful

Posted 9 Years Ago


Eve Ola

9 Years Ago

Thank you your words are really appreciating
In love even desperation starts looking beautiful and the pain can create such beautiful poems.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Eve Ola

9 Years Ago

thank you. i appreciate your comment as always :)
This is a lovely write, dear. You've expressed yourself well!! Keep it up! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Eve Ola

9 Years Ago

Thanks Madalyn :)
That was so lovely...
you did a great job here

Posted 9 Years Ago


Eve Ola

9 Years Ago

Thanks dear :)
just love love love this poem it just expressed me and my feelings right now and very similar to my recent poem why do i dream
hats off i rly love it

Posted 9 Years Ago


Eve Ola

9 Years Ago

Thank you em glad i wrote something that you relate too :)
vaishnavi

9 Years Ago

your welcome and keep on writing more like it
This reminds me of the song "addicted to you" by Simple Plan. A poem showered with roses and love ^_^ I enjoyed reading this one.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Eve Ola

9 Years Ago

And your words showered more frangrance to this poem.thank you :)
Mirra

9 Years Ago

You're Welcome ^_^

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Added on June 6, 2014
Last Updated on August 10, 2014
Tags: Love, drug, addiction, substitute, sad, loneliness

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