I'm Missing You Mr.Right

I'm Missing You Mr.Right

A Poem by Eve Ola
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Long Distance Relationship..

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I'm Missing You Mr.Right


Why can't I speak,
When I have so much to tell?
Why can't I write,
When I have so much in mind?
Why can't I sing,
When there's music in my heart?
Why can't I dance,
When there's rhythm in the air?

Is this the pain of missing you?
Is this the reason behind it all?
Too many words left unspoken
Too many things left undone
Why can't it be and why can't I?
When will the waiting ever be over?

Hear the agony of my heart
Longing for you and for your touch
Feeling your hug, feeling your face
Missing your words and
Too many sweet fights...
For all I know this pain is so deep
That took the gladness from my heart
And left me alone like a dead soul

Oh! My Dearest Love
I just want you to know
That my heart is aching
And it hurting me a lot, because

"I'M MISSING YOU!"


~AK~

© Eve Ola

© 2014 Eve Ola


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So beautifully described your feelings in this poem I liked it. Written very well in confused state of mind good job.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Eve Ola

9 Years Ago

"confused state of mind" these words best describe my poem and state .. thats why i highlighted :) n.. read more
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a very well structured poem.....so nicely written.....

Posted 9 Years Ago


Eve Ola

9 Years Ago

Thanks for the read dear :)
That so innocent and wonderfuly done, i loved this poem and hehe i can somehow relate to that :')

Posted 9 Years Ago


That so innocent and wonderfuly done, i loved this poem and hehe i can somehow relate to that :')

Posted 9 Years Ago


Eve Ola

9 Years Ago

wow glad u can relate too :) Thanks dear
Long distance relationship makes one longing so much.
Sweet and romantic poem.


Posted 9 Years Ago


Eve Ola

9 Years Ago

Thank you Ayushi :)
Its such a beautiful poem that I cant express it in words....

Posted 9 Years Ago


Eve Ola

9 Years Ago

sweet Thanks Priya :)
I can really feel the longing in this heart felt poem.
Thanks for sharing this. : )

Posted 9 Years Ago


Eve Ola

9 Years Ago

Thanks for the feedback Ance :)

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