[.Your Contribution.]

It's about worldly corruption, and that's all I really have to say.

This world is corrupt
Full of hate, greed, and lust
Where we print on our god
The words "In God We Trust"
I hear spiteful cries
"I'm more Christian than you."
Hypocrisy, lies
"What would Jesus do?"
There's so much death
And the unborn go first
"Our country's the best!"
Our country's the worst.
Satanic rituals and shooting up schools
Burning down churches
A world full of fools
Blasphemy, Sodomy, Heresy, Lunacy
I see what's real and you see what you want to see
Pornography, torture
And stray dogs with rabies
Serial killers, kidnappers
Trash cans full of babies
We are the blood of a world this corrupt
We push ourselves closer to an end so abrupt
Cut down the forest and build highways right through
Not a fan of morals?
This world's perfect for you
Drugs, prostitution, religion, pollution
Buddhism, terrorism, and your contribution
Say what you want, but even you've sinned
I'll just sit here and wait
For our oncoming end.

Author's Note

I hope you like this, it was one of my first writings.

Reviews

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An amazing tribute to the failing system that we call humanity.

This flowed smoothly, filling the reader with the intensity that you must feel for these issues.
Many people just let society glaze over the true problems with it.
Your words have opened those blinders and let the light of truth wash back in.

I enjoyed reading this. :)

[Kirsty Lee]

Good.

Because as a first writing you poured out raw feelings and it created an amazing poem. This is my favorite no doubt. You are an amazing writer, to just let the poem flow and dip in our heads while we read. Great work!