For You.

The heart, the breath;
Invaded by an intoxicating soul.
Now, what? Just come to think of it:
What if this throbbing heart, reflecting the irresistible sensation like a fragile mirror, breaks apart?
What if this exhilarating breath, flying like a Pegasus, drops dead?
The sunshine days, the starlit nights;
Imprisoned by an intoxicating soul.
It is you. You.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Leo]

I like especially the beginning: "What if this throbbing heart, reflecting the irresistible sensation like a fragile mirror, breaks apart? What if this exhilarating breath, flying like a Pegasus, drops dead?" these were two great lines with wonderful analogies and rhythm..the end though wasn't as great as the above..overall I like it!

[Fahmida Mehreen]

Thank you for your feed back. It'll help me be better. :)

[Unknown Poet]

Very touching
I like it very much....
Thank you for sharing.... :)

[Fahmida Mehreen]

Oh my! The pleasure is all mine. Much obliged to thank you for giving it your time. Keep the encouragement coming. :)

[Unknown Poet]

You are most welcomed Mehreen *Smiles*