A boy.

A boy.

A Poem by Lacinius
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just mumbo-jumbo

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A boy.

So young and naive.

So carefree and outgoing.

And yet, so charming,

So sensitive without the knowledge of it.

If only he knew what he was capable of...

He could change the world.

© 2008 Lacinius


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Even though this is rather short, it still spoke to me. I know someone very much like the boy you seemed to describe in the poem. Smart, outgoing, and a natural leader...But he has yet to discover it. People like this exist one way or another in everyone's lives. Whether they choose to realize it or not. Great work!

Posted 15 Years Ago


Yes I would say this is how a boy would feel, you captured the essence of him very well. to me it is a cute, little poem about the nature of a boy.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Lacinius

Willow Spring, NC



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