Can't Win

Can't Win

A Poem by fallen_sueanne
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Broken hearts suck

"

i was foolish to let you go
blinded of what we had
i thought i could have better
but you were the best there was

i love you more han your heart can take
i love you so much its going to break
and i didnt know 'til i lost you
my one true love

i took you right back to me
because i loved you so
but then you said you found her
and after you let me go

i've tried so much since then
done all that i could do
but still chose some other girl
and my heart broke in two

why do i have to hide?oh, no
why are my tears falling like this?
yeah, deep in my mind, i know
a broken heart can not be fixed

baby, why am i still loving you
i swear you have me under lock and key
there are other guys that i know
but you have taken my heart from me

i have cried all of my tears
and i have shouted out my screams
i can throw a fit all i want to
but that won't bring you back to me

i can fight and i can argue
i can cuss and make myself bleed
but pity and anger won't do anything
and sure won't bring you back to me

i love you more than my heart can take
i love you so much its going to break
and i didn't know 'til i lost you
my one true love

the wind blows and the wolf howls
i hear a voice everytime that i see
that little bench under that cherry tree
remembering the blossoms that were falling

 

© 2009 fallen_sueanne


Author's Note

fallen_sueanne
Please ignore capitalization errors. Thank you <3

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Wifey, this is great! I really feel that sense of loss... It is awesome, but at the same time very sad...

Posted 14 Years Ago


aw

Posted 14 Years Ago


this is sad :/

Posted 14 Years Ago


Damn, super sad.. :/ I want to feel sorry for you, even though its some other guy. Really good job, sueanne.

Oh, and just to say...I'd never hurt you like that, babe ;)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Beautiful pained and a definite stream of conciouusness.. the echo of a broken heart a well presented piece very well done

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on August 1, 2009

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Back 10 years later with a need to let my self create. Would love someone to have a normal chat with. more..

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