Does Anyone Care

feelling forgotten and invisible...I wonder where I stand

If anyone cared I wouldn't be standing here alone. I feel forgotten and invisible, my wish is just to disappear. Forsaken by those who are supposed to care, I wonder where it is I stand. Alone ,invisible, feigning peace yet only recognizing pain....I wonder if anyone cares.....All I need is for someone to say that they miss me and they care....then maybe I would have some hope and something to believe in. But I stand here alone and forgotten...knowing that no one cares and no one ever will.... And why should they?

Author's Note

eh....i dont even know

Reviews

[Flo_writer]

Umm, why so sad and alone. I'm sure more people cares than you know. We're our own worst critics and assumption are a b*%^h. It's take courage to write out your personal feelings, and you got your across very clearly. Besides the depressing feeling it brings me, I like it.

[visions of doom]

oh how wrong you are , there are some wonderful people on this site gorgeous and you are already becoming a firm favourite with many of us . we care a great deal and i can tell you this much , we are so much richer for having you with us . our arms are around you giving you a huge hug , feel the warmth and open your heart . show us your big beautiful smile .

[Lizanne]

No one cares? Look how many people have already stopped by to check on this youthful woman that is slowly blossoming into a very skilled poet. Sometimes we are looking in front of us, scanning the horizon for someone that cares, when all the time they are standing right be side us as lonely as we are and awaiting our acceptance.

[Poeticpiers]

you stand at the brink of self realisation M lady.
only when you recognise your worth will others recognise who and what you are
You present your thoughts in poetic prose most clearly

[Marlena]

Hmm....I like it, but there are a lot of typos. You okay?

Either way, good job,call me if you need anything, okay?