Lovely as can be

Lovely as can be

A Poem by Fanciful Goddess

I love you.
I never called out to someone by heart,for their love.
Only yours I want.
Only yours I need.
My heart hears all love songs .
This lovely melody of love is lovely ,as lovely can be.
It maybe my heart i hear love songs from.
They  keep me by  your side for always.

© 2009 Fanciful Goddess


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Great poem. You voice doesn't seem to come out as greatly in this peom as your others. That's ok though. It always takes work to get voice to show through clearly. Still a great write though. To possibly incerase your voice you could use more diction. The word lovely or loved is used to much. You could possibly true using the would affection. Remember not all poems have to ryhme. Still a great write. Keep writing.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Fanciful Goddess
Fanciful Goddess

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(ABOUT ME) Brandy Nicole Taylor June 27,1986 Brown hair Brown eyes 5"1" I'm 25 years old -------------------- (´-`).。oO( Oops I farted ψ(`∇&ac.. more..

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