Truely lonely and empty

Endlessly in love .suiside

Why,why was I born?

Just to have my heart broken?

Your my happiness in this empty world.

Now it's truly lonely and empty.

Endless tears flow.

Looking at the unreachable love,

that is you.

This song will keep me in a tight grip of pain.

This spell upon me is deadly love.

I'v been left to bleed.

With a daggar in my breast.

I fall to the ground.

Never to see the light of day.

I die.

I died a death so painful.

My heart was broken.

My life was without perpose.

How sad.

Cuz I was endlessly in love.

You were my reason for living.

I left behind a love song.

I love you.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Wolfbaby]

Wow this was intense. I can see the person in the poem was hurt pretty bad if she/he was willing to commit suicide. Is one person really worth dying over though?

In line three the first word should be "You're" instead of "Your". The one you used is possessive. "You're" Is a state of being.

Other than that it was a great poem. Your punctuation was good. Great job!

~Wolfbaby

[Sseoni]

Wow! What an epic poem! I really liked it! :D