ENTWINED BY SOUL

Deep in my heart you will forever stay

Like the scars of our memories that lay.....

The thunder and lighting compatible like our chemistry

Like the heavy rain reminding me of our past history......

The pain in my heart is like a burning agonized flame

Rising and igniting until I erase the thought of your name.....

I miss the warmth and feeling of our soul entwined

The sunshine lighting your face and the sound peace......

If only they were reality and not a past

I guess there is no use fighting

You know you will be my last....

My soul will live with you in my thought

You know you are my true love knot.....

I know my life will go on

As long as I have you along...

So what if not in reality

I will survive with your fantasy.....

Author's Note

All comments are happily accepted

Reviews

[Dayran]

A truer statement has never been made. Keep it up Fan.

[Cerise]

Thank you so much..:)

[Vidya Bacchus]

A really lovely poem .The words deeply heartfelt and full of emotion.Well penned :)

[Cerise]

Thank you for your kind words..:)

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[Coyote Poetry]

"So what if not in reality
I will survive with your fantasy....."
I beautiful poem. The above line is true. True love stay in our mind and heart forever. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Cerise]

Thank you for your kind words..:)

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Good show.. Memories are meant to remain forever and jotting down is again not an easy task..!!!

Keep Sharing!!

Good Wishes!!

[Cerise]

thank you..:)

[DIVYA]

Though I appreciate your feelings and they are very well expressed here, Fancyfati, the rhyme looks a bit forced, especially here..."My soul will live with you in my thought
You know you are my true love knot....."

Please don't mind but I have this problem of not being able to get out of the rhyme addiction and I am trying hard to beat it (with little success till date) Keep writing!

Thanks for sharing the lovely write.

[Frieda P]

A painful Valentine's day read, the angst is palpable on the page, sometimes we find that one love that lives on in our spirit eternally....

[Cerise]

awww...thankyou my lady....its sweet of u to review..:)

[Frieda P]

The pleasure was mine :-)

[Scott Metro]

The seasons come and go..and as sad as it is.. so do our seasons of love.
The mystery has never been solved...

Enjoyed it
Scott

[Cerise]

Thank you..:)

[Scott Metro]

:)
Scott......

[Sami Khalil]

"Deep in my heart you will forever stay
Like the scars of our memories that lay.....

The thunder and lighting compatible like our chemistry

Like the heavy rain reminding me of our past history......




The pain in my heart is like a burning agonized flame

Rising and igniting until I erase the thought of your name.....

I miss the warmth and feeling of our soul entwined

The sunshine lighting your face and the sound peace......"

The first two stanzas were wonderful. I like the whole too...:)......

[Cerise]

Thank you so much for taking ur precious tym to review...:)

[Sami Khalil]

My pleaure...Any time...:)....................