JUST LET GO......

The time has come for you to go

My feelings will leave even if it's slow

The end has come for us to depart

Your time in my life is over, My heart

I kept you in my life stretching my time

I tried my level best but, I don't give a dime

Am letting you go just go far beyond

Oh my darling!! we did have a great bond

I close my eyes and take a deep breathe

Its difficult to live but I feel my death

Your role in my life has come to an end

But trust me those memories were god send

My love, you will always be my high prize

You were my growth, And My rise

Your happiness will always be my last wish

I close my eyes to imagine our bliss....

Author's Note

No one is going to stay in your life forever....Some day..Somewhere everyone is goign to leave you...Never be dependent on anyone....Its time we all lived our life for ourselves......

Reviews

[Ruth]

We do take for granted connections, at times - honest piece that reminds the reader that they do have to care for the self as well x

[Cerise]

Thank you for your review..:)

[Ency Bearis]

A unique poem and well penned.

[Cerise]

Thank you.....

[Lyn Anderson]

A wonderful truthful piece. A very minor thing. The it's in first stanza needs an apostrophe.

[Cerise]

ahh..thank you..:)

[Vidya Bacchus]

There are people who enter our lives play their part and leave this is the stage of our life.Great pen :)

[Cerise]

Thank you...:)

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[Rita L. Sev]

Endings are just new beginnings... and oh, the memories they spark... Nicely done.

[Cerise]

Thank you....:)

[?]

loved it so much. it is really good, and i loved all of it. thank you for sharing your writing with everyone.

[Cerise]

Thank you for your review..:)

[Dayran]

A fork in the road of decision making. Nice ...

[Cerise]

Thank you..:)

[Stefanie Holmes]

That heartbreaking moment when someone you care for and you have invested so much time in is leaving. You conveyed the emotions beautifully with brutal honesty and I enjoyed that. Well done!

~Stefanie

[Cerise]

Thank you for your wonderful review..:)

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

The end to a love affair can take many forms. It is usual for one person to be left with feelings with of betrayal and heartbreak.
I like this scenario. Nice poem,

[Cerise]

Thank you..:)