You Live In Me....

You Live In Me....

A Poem by Cerise
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a short term love

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I see you  come with a pout 
Your scent seeking me out
I try to ignore but for how long
Till when will I hold the passion at bay
I am sorry that you dont have a say

You are the light on my deep dark way
You are the rain on a scorching sunny day
You are my soothing balm on the itchy wound
I am sorry that you had to be marooned

I know baby , we were so well in tune
I guess things go wrong even if we assume
I owe you a lot but I cannot stay
Each of us have to find our way

There is no second choice I do know
Like I read you, if only you could read me too..

© 2014 Cerise


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Cerise
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i had it read to me out loud and it sounded AMAZING.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Cerise

4 Years Ago

Thank you for review..:)
Some relationships can not be long term because the spark fizzles and only one is warm and loving. Better to move on from that sort of relationship. Good rhyming in this poem. Lydi**

Posted 4 Years Ago


Cerise

4 Years Ago

Thank you for review....
Well penned!
Break ups suck, but sometimes it's a must!
This piece is straight forward and clear,
I just posted a break up piece as well, hope you check
it out, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Cerise

5 Years Ago

Thank you for review....
its a very short and precise poem i enjoyed reading it well written

Posted 5 Years Ago


Cerise

5 Years Ago

Thank you for revieq..:)
this is great! I have to agree with it as well! ;) Nice job.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Cerise

5 Years Ago

Thank you....:)
This poem rymes it's amazing I loved reading this write.

Kaze~

Posted 5 Years Ago


Cerise

5 Years Ago

Thank you...
Lildeadcupcake

5 Years Ago

Anytime. :-)))
I liked it. You told it in a straightforward way. Really enjoyed it. I suppose it's hard to let go and you wrote it well. Thank you.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Cerise

5 Years Ago

Thank you...
Confuser

5 Years Ago

Your quite welcome.
It's groovy, it jives. It sounds like you were either very interested and disappointed that she could not/ cannot read you, or weren't truly interested at all and now because you are making the best of things in your current place, situation, or set of circumstances.

I like to believe as a rejected love person that all these lines are wrong for someone who wants to be near you when distant. One might wish to argue until some distraction comes along and rules a togetherness out. I'm not sure.

Posted 5 Years Ago


First of all, let me get it straight that.. Yeah, I do live in you.. believe me! *Joking*
Some broken tears got slipped down the eyes to rivers... your emotions`re strong. But hey, come on... let me see your chilly smile now.. ok.. ok.. yeah, you read me so, yes.. I could even do read you as well. Now smile please. *Kidding*

Nice poetry. I like the choice of words! ;)

Posted 5 Years Ago


Neon

5 Years Ago

Ah~ Thank God, No.. I just thought, you saving my words and then "file a case" on me that I took you.. read more
Cerise

5 Years Ago

I would save it all and publish it so u r officially known world wide as the king
Neon

5 Years Ago

You make me chuckle ;)
i liked the end ryhmes within this poem

Posted 5 Years Ago


Cerise

5 Years Ago

Thank you...

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Cerise

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