Desire

Free verse

Desire

In an embrace so tender, draw near, 

Where heartbeats entwine, so clear.

Fingertips trace as bodies collide.

 intertwined as one, a dance does reside.

Gently caressing, igniting desire, 

Passion's flames grow like a burning fire.

 Beads of sweat form; in rhythm,they fall. 

Whispers of desire, a silent plea, 

Two souls dance in intimacy.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

intimacy can be a passionate dance; it can be a careful dance---and sometimes we just dance around the romance because there are too many interferences and the music just isn't quite playing our song.
But here the bodies, minds and hearts collide and intertwine with closest of feelings.
j.

[Farjana Shah Chaity]

Your eloquent words beautifully capture the essence of intimacy and its intricate dance. It's a sentiment I resonate with deeply. Thank you for sharing your thoughts.

[willweb]

That was really nice. Soft, tender and alluring. This how desire feels and you have captured it perfectly. Love the rhyming in this as well.

[Farjana Shah Chaity]

thank you for sharing your thoughts.

[Chris Shaw]

Full of passion. A beautiful dance of intimacy. First of yours I have read chaity.Welcome to WC. Pleased I stopped by.

Chris

[Farjana Shah Chaity]

Thank you for your kind words! I'm glad you enjoyed the piece. Looking forward to sharing more in the future.

[Neville]

one can beat an egg and a drum .. but those tender fingertip connections simply can't be beat .. can they .. Neville

[Farjana Shah Chaity]

Thank you so much for your words, it motivates me…chaity

[Neville]

my pleasure entirely ..