Calling

Calling

A Poem by fatalsymphonies

Bleeding hearts ricochet through the forest,
with cries and begs and pleads for morning.

The piercing chills crumble through porous screams,
your voice is all I hear in the clapping of the leaves.

I search for you, groping the soupy muds under my toes,
calling your name, my own vocalization bestows.

The thirsty winds deceive me, tapering off through the trees,
As I beg and plead of the others, please,
You must stop flirting with the melodies.

I choke a cry, one last cry you may ever hear,
the syllables of your name strengthening in a soothing, yet painful note of grace.

© 2011 fatalsymphonies


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Your talent continues to flourish.You take us into the forrest of your life and show us a hidden spot of sadness.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Well done and so sad.

Posted 13 Years Ago


You have such range with all of your work. Every thing you right has a different style, yet it all hits at the heart.

Posted 13 Years Ago


sorrowful and sophisticated.

Posted 13 Years Ago


The longing and desperation felt here is amazing. I almost feel like shes ready to lose consciousness and his name is the last words spoken.. I really love it.. x

Posted 13 Years Ago



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