Maybe , We were just not made for each other !

Sweeping my emotions , giving it wings , 

I think about  you , and joy it brings .

Sweet as sugar  sour as lime  , 

Are the memories which lie behind . 

Baby !   why are you  killing me and shattering my dreams , 

Please , listen to my silent screams . 

My heart is heavy to say goodbye  

I have no more to say  ,  

I never felt that we would separate  

I never felt this way . 

But what ever have been  done  , is  done 

Now I have to wait for the next to come  , 

Darkness from my life will slowly disappear  

A bright ray of light will soon then appear . 

Two people , with so much faith in each other ,

 but in the end  , maybe 

We were not just made for each other .

- Fatima wani .

Reviews

[khalid]

very nicely penned. alot of feelings of love and passion expressed in a very nice way. i loved how you have picked your words, i love the flow, the images and metaphors. although it is sad in the part of beeing apart, you have penned it nicely making it a real good read..

thank you for such a nice poem..i like it

[Fatima Wani]

Thank you for appreciating my work , I'm very glad you liked it .

[khalid]

my pleasure..your work worths it

[Fatima Wani]

:)

[Reyes Mir]

Maybe you were made to be a writer.

[Fatima Wani]

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[SquinklaPsyOps]

The character in the poem is trying to say that she was born with fear and is trying to make her interest join her so she could have somebody to hang on to on her journey through life.

[Fatima Wani]

So true. :)