Crying all night.

What's left there?

Nothing,I guess,

No causes to stop you,

and you telling me ,I'm letting you go.

So hurt, so broken,

I need to fix myself first, 

there is a vacuum in my life, 

my mind is full of hatred now, 

I've lost all my faith.

This is the end, this is it,

I won't stop you ever again, 

why do I need to beg you for something?

that you also need.

Okay, just let it be, let be the way you want, 

I've now set you free, 

Come on, go move on, It's all your choice, 

I'm  not going to hold your hand tight,

to stop you from going away.

And if,there ever comes a day when you'll look back again , 

you'll see my back facing you, 

and don't please expect me to turn back around, for you, 

I've no reasons to look back, that way!

Reviews

[pinhead07]

Break ups, when people feel they no longer understand each other when once they vowed they did, one does lose all faith in people

[Bushra Naqshbandi]

A powerful portrayal of love, pain, despair and strength. Letting go requires great strength. And refusing to come back reqiures it even more. Beautiful poem.

and don't please expect me to turn back around, for you,
This line is powerfully emotional and emotionally powerful. However, I think it should be ''and please don't expect....'' instead of ''and don't please expect......''.

But on the whole, a nicely penned poem. Really, really emotional. May Allah bless you and ease your suffering. :)