Who ARE you?

 

To make it

And fake it

And break it

And take it

 

To hate it

And grate it

And rate it

And weight it

 

Who do you think you are?

 

To touch it

And taste it

To clutch it

But waste it

 

To hold it

And favour it

To mold it

But razor it

 

Who, do you think, you are?

 

Race it

Trace it

Erase it

Can’t face it

 

Played it

Slayed it

Raid it

Done with this

Reviews

[hi]

this is good, i like it seems like a poem about hate of the world

[justdandy]

"To hate it

And grate it

And rate it

And weight it"- I love this stanza

[747]

Thanks, it's one of my favourites as well.

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We are what we do and we are creators of our self. This what I understandt . From your piece. Very beautiful and minimalistic writing.

[747]

Indeed we are. I'm glad you liked it, thanks for reading Marketa.

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You wellcome . I was happy to read. And thanks for reading my poem.