the girl's got sway

the girl's got sway

A Poem by felioness
"

some girls have it...

"





when she walks

people watch


eyes move up
and down

her body moving

... this way
that way  ...

the girl's got sway that puts a man on edge

can even make him pray ...

"lord jesus!"
"that girl could make a dead man come"

he'd say ...


like a leopard she's
... sinuous ... sleek

one just can't help but
take a peek ...


cause her body's meant for play ....


when she walks

even the women watch


their eyes move up
and down

her body moving

this way ...
... that way


sometimes they frown


other times they eye her
like birds of prey ... 


because ...

the girl's got sway

© 2013 felioness


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I liked this a lot. Some watch wishing to be her.. Great job.
♥ Ta'Shandra

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow, all I can say is wow and Im a loud mouth (just ask my girlfriend) this was very erotic and smooth at the same time. So many things can be implied and so many things are just so damned vivid. Nice job

Posted 12 Years Ago


very nice! reads like a dream.

Posted 13 Years Ago


thanks Neva!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Yes! Some watch with jealousy, some with curiosity.........men just can't help but watch period......truth is....everyone watches. Excellent!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on May 7, 2011
Last Updated on November 12, 2013
Tags: erotic, sexy, women

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felioness
felioness

Saskatchewan, Canada



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