Boy So Blue

Boy So Blue

A Poem by Zach

A song I wrote. If you are interested hearing it to music you can do so here:


Compare these lights in town, and when I laugh I lay me down,

I trace those lips I love to taste, and when I make a sound, make a sound,

I want to wake and I don’t want to hate the day away,

Will you take these steps I make and when I make my bed I lie in it,

I want to see you in love, in love love love


If walking round in circles gets you around,

Then pick your head up your going down,

And if talking back to mirrors makes you feel good,

Then ask the questions you’re afraid of.

Well I can tell you this if you let me,

The boy is so damn blue without you,

You’re the sun, the stars, the moon, in his eyes,

He’ll make you feel good, he’ll make you shine


Well take the pictures down, don’t feel like hanging around

Can’t chase those dreams to waste, when I run, I run away,

I want to bring you flowers, kiss the petals and thorns

Will you take the seconds down, break the clocks on the wall,

I want to see you in love, in love love love 

© 2013 Zach

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Hi Zach

You writing and pics are as cool as you yourself. Can't be that much formal but yes I like your art.

Posted 5 Years Ago

This is gorgeous!!!

Posted 6 Years Ago

A splendid read and write...Thank you for sharing...:).......................

Posted 7 Years Ago

I actually like the lyrics a lot as they stand on their own, though listening to the song definitely gave the words another sort of seasoning equally as interesting. Very lovely.

Posted 7 Years Ago

It was really really good. I listened to the music and all I could say was it was a good composition. Thumbs up! :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


7 Years Ago

Thank you Cassie. Singing is def not one of my stronger talents lol. But when I write something I .. read more

7 Years Ago

But you sang good, keep it up! Actually I downloaded it. Haha.

7 Years Ago

oh well I am flattered :]

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5 Reviews
Added on December 2, 2013
Last Updated on December 2, 2013
Tags: boy, blue, song, lyric, love, romance



Suffolk, VA

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