"tears"

sitting in a quiet room
enjoying and feeling the tranquility
while looking at the window
my only witness is the beautiful moon.

thinking of the years i've spent
crying over non-sense events
now i know, and it all make sense
those tears were meant.

tears that made me stronger
tears that made me better
tears beacuse of pains
tears beacuse of joy
and these tears are there
to make the burden lesser.

Reviews

[Mica]

your descriptions were absolutely amazing! this is something everyone can relate to... tears making the burden lesser... beautiful wording!

[::Yv0nne::]

I think eveyone has felt this at one point or another in thier life. "Tears are there to make the burden lesser"...yes crying is good sometimes it allows us to let out all our emotions that that we hold in. Nice poem and good job:)

[Jola]

A beautiful poem full of emotions ... a very good job!!!

[Bare trees]

A very nice little poem that I think people can relate to with a good ending.