"He's gone"

She wanted to share with him

the goals she have accomplished,

but it seems that...

She will never be able to speak to him anymore,

not because she chose not to...

but because she think  that he's completely gone.

 

Wishing that she can still talk to him

like it was before...laugh with him...

eat with him...walk with him,

and sit on a passenger seat of his car,

wish that she's with him...

 

She knows in my heart...

that he has so much influenced in her,

that because of him...

She have blossomed into a fine woman

and learned the virtue of patience...

 

He has taught her a lot...

But what happened?

Where is he now?

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[The Tea Party Mouse.]

It's terrible when people suddenly come into your life and then leave almost as easily as they came. A great opic for writing. :)

[Theresa]

You meet people in life that help shape you as a person but you can't always have them around. You describe this perfectly within this piece.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are a very good writer. Your description of losing and separation is written without hate or sadness. Just longing and thankfulness. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[deeps]

This is another quite the emotional write here really! I could feel the emotions your poured out here.

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Pondering on where one's old love has gone.. wishing you could still be next to them must be really hard. It sounds like this person had some pretty big and some good influence on you.. as you accredit much of who you are today from this other. Patience is a great virture to learn from another.. while you miss him so much he may or not feel the same.. he may be enjoying himself.. which if I think of anyone so closely I think that way.. I would like to think they are doing well and happy. I love your passion in these writings so far.. this sounds like a love that will stay in your heart for eternity in such great memories.. awesome!