Contradictions

Contradictions

A Poem by Arik
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I just had a thought

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They say life is short,
But patience is a virtue.
Tell me, which is right?

© 2012 Arik


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Pax
a hiaku that ends up a question is just right, but wondering if its right whether its the first or the second sentence, well i think its both. great work my friend.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Your haikus are so wonderfully written, how do you do it. I like the contradictory nature of this one, it really leaves you thinking, great job.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Arik

8 Years Ago

Thank you very much. Honestly I just have random thoughts throughout the day, and I find that Haiku .. read more
A lot of people hesitate at the chance to live, while others dive right in. A very thought provoking piece, keep it up.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Arik
Arik

Apple Valley, CA



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