A Poem by Arik

I just had a thought

They say life is short,
But patience is a virtue.
Tell me, which is right?

© 2012 Arik

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a hiaku that ends up a question is just right, but wondering if its right whether its the first or the second sentence, well i think its both. great work my friend.

Posted 10 Years Ago

Your haikus are so wonderfully written, how do you do it. I like the contradictory nature of this one, it really leaves you thinking, great job.

Posted 10 Years Ago

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10 Years Ago

Thank you very much. Honestly I just have random thoughts throughout the day, and I find that Haiku .. read more
A lot of people hesitate at the chance to live, while others dive right in. A very thought provoking piece, keep it up.

Posted 10 Years Ago

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Added on July 5, 2012
Last Updated on July 5, 2012
Tags: patience, life, virtue, short, contradiction



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