Color Me Torn

Color Me Torn

A Poem by Jane Doe

Color me torn,

To show the world and all those within it,

The way I feel,

It will all go away in a bit.

 

Color me torn,

Black on the inside, glowing red on the outside,

So tell me now,

How have I resurrected and died.

 

Tell them of the time,

When you tore me away,

Colored me torn cause,

I will do what you say.

 

Color me torn,

Because I am lost without you,

But I don't want to lose you both,

Color me torn, for I don't know what to do. 

© 2013 Jane Doe


Author's Note

Jane Doe
Boys and Girls, Cats and Squirrels color me torn.

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I liked the line

"How have I resurrected and died."

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jane Doe

10 Years Ago

why is that?(:
walkingman117

10 Years Ago

I guess because it's powerful life and death stuff... also because the 'resurrected' comes before th.. read more
Jane Doe

10 Years Ago

well thank you(: very much

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