Gone:(

Gone:(

A Poem by Jane Doe

          Gone...,  

             like the wind,

like the lives of soldiers,

like the hope in me that this is all a dream,

like the O-zone in a few years,

like the blood in you when you slit your wrist,

like my faith in you that you will call back when i called you two days ago,

cause pain is some thing that never goes away wether you are dead or alive.

© 2009 Jane Doe


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Jane Doe
its not true i just wanted to write more

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Damn............. Speechless.

Posted 12 Years Ago


really kool, and really deep even though it was just for fun

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 19, 2009

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I miss the way words would flow out on to a page and express my deepest concerns so I have returned. more..

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