Shaded

Shaded

A Poem by Jane Doe
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for a group writing thang hope ya like it

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Shaded

 

Shaded,

Jaded,

From the saddness,

From the coldness of the world.

 

Hurtful,

Dreadful,

Hurt from those stupid liars,

I call friends, they're 'pose to stop the dreading.

 

Painted,

Picture Perfect,

All the loners walking the street are the best friends,

You'll ever meet.

 

Skipping,

Saddly,

skipping by the hobo's that are lonely and hungry,

Saddly No ONE will help them give'em a second chance.

 

The thing is if you never got a second chance would you be where you are today?,

Even the slightest care of a greet helps a simple 'hey'.

© 2010 Jane Doe


Author's Note

Jane Doe
idk the picture inspires :)

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I love it I always fill sorry for hobos :( I gave one my whole wallet lol

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

^_^ I thought it was pretty good

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on August 5, 2010
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Jane Doe
Jane Doe

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I miss the way words would flow out on to a page and express my deepest concerns so I have returned. more..

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