:) poetry

Collaboration success!:) 

Pen,
Paper,
I have them both under my command,
Under the tyranny of my visions, thoughts, and dreams,
Under the hood of my idle being.

Rhyme,
After rhyme,
No more I am sick of it,
I have written free verse,
No more coloring within the lines,
It's pure emotion it's pure poetry.

The end is near,
But the poetry,
Still here,
The thoughts and the ink as well.

Author's Note

For all who read my work constantly
I wanted to try something different its a poem by me and Chris sal
He wrote the first verse and I wrote the last two.

What do you think
Collaboration success?????!?!????:)

Reviews

[DreyaArt]

wow thats pretty good, very pretty, :) you are a good poet, keep writing.
collaboration is a success :)

[Tasha]

A terrific success. Such a great collaboration.
♥ Ta'Shandra

[leinahtan]

hahaha. nice nice! it collaborated like sex! XD hahaha just half joking. :P

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Totally a sucess, the whole poem fits together so well, and thoughts flow so poetically and relate to me certainly, excellent collaboration :)