survive

survive

A Poem by Jane Doe

The battle,
You may have lost,
But the war you must win,
No matter what it cost.

Overcome the obstacles,
In your path,
Make it through and end it,
In a nice warm relaxing bath.

If your alive,
I am too,
But if you die,
I wouldnt know what to do without you.

You must survive,
For you have to much to live for,
Life gave you a cup,
To fill it, my love i will pour.

© 2012 Jane Doe


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Whaaaa the Whaaaat?! In the path, relaxing bath...my goodness...I wish it was that easy, but it some times is....Hey the Whaaa the Whaaat...for you have to much to live for, Life gave you a cup, to fill it, my love i will pour, what concoction is this??? Gosh, I hope you are not moving too fast Lil Pinay Princess...you should worry about buying hello kitty...but I must say, you have skillsaroo to pay the billsaroo. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Terrific write...
and very loving and warm sentiments...
eg "Life gave you a cup,
To fill it, my love i will pour."
Great poem :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on January 17, 2012
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