It's behind us boo

It's behind us boo

A Poem by Jane Doe
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Two people wit the worst past can make the best future"

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Don't worry the past is the past,
We are in front of it,
Soon to be even further ahead,
Continue walking away never dwell or sit.

We are together now,
You and I, Me and you,
Forever together,
Staying true blue.

Now we have to look forward,
Smiles and laughs,
Washing our problems away,
During our baths.

Call me crazy,
But when I am with you no one else is around,
Maybe if I make the first move,
You'll find what I found.

Maybe its craziness,
Maybe im just in love,
Maybe just maybe,
Your my guardian angel sent from above.

© 2012 Jane Doe


Author's Note

Jane Doe
"Two people wit the worst past can make the best future""Meet tons of people a day then you meet that one and your life is changed completely" read these and thought of him<3

Washing our problems away,
During our baths.
To explain these lines, well i pray in the shower it may make more sense now hopefully it does:)

~a

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Love it. Sharing the bath could also represent something that's very intimate for two people in love. I see where your were going with it, but it's not like two strangers bathe together. Also the biblical reference of using water to cleanse the past is nice.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow this is amazing. So very true and open, i love it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This made me Cry, This guy is SOOO Lucky Wonderful write!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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