i got your mail, and i do liked it. thanks for letting me read; i especially searched it just to review. anyway, you captured the flower's beauty, both physical and divine. because of this, i came to love my name. (: i feel good about it now. it would be nice to see irises for real, you know, because ive never seen one. ): great write. thanks for inspiring people. (:
. a big, big thank you ... yet again ... to inkcognito ... for reviewing this right now and making it visible to me ... it's a ravishing ode ... brilliant composition and rendition ...
Your last line adds a mystical edge to your poem. The iris is a beautiful flower with the ability to live just about anywhere. Your poem makes me think that we have noticed only the outer beauty of these flowers and a more in depth observation is deserved, especially since "they know".
i got your mail, and i do liked it. thanks for letting me read; i especially searched it just to review. anyway, you captured the flower's beauty, both physical and divine. because of this, i came to love my name. (: i feel good about it now. it would be nice to see irises for real, you know, because ive never seen one. ): great write. thanks for inspiring people. (:
i have the purple sophisticated and it is my favorite..love the coiffure image,
irises are so sturdy, the best fragrance anywhere, and yet delicate..
great poem.
Very well penned in accurate descriptives for those seeking the limelight~tho~ I find purple(my fave) to be a rather mystical/spiritual color and can be humbling of spirit and soothing to the mind~I suppose it's all one's perspective~ WeLl DonE!
After 38 years of working as an automotive design sculptor, I retired and have been doing a bit of fishing and writing poems. I've gotten better at both and had some recognition. Most of my poems are .. more..